Good Rock write. Killer BAND.

Your vocal on this is strong! As other mention, they sometimes stand out too much (for a Rock song), but I'm not sure it is a volume issue. Some added reverb and delay might tuck it in the mix a bit, yet keep the clarity. Just a guess, of course..

LOVE that last yell.

The guitar solos are a bit loud.

Excellent rocker. Good subject choice with a strong lyric.

fj