I'm a newbie so, I'm learning a little about BIAB and enjoying all the great songs people are offering up here.
The forum is pretty rich with content and I hope to be diving in deeper over time.

Based on the few songs I've heard from you, I'm intrigued by your lyrical style.
The songs are almost like short stories.
This song is one more great example of that........well done.

Maybe because I'm new and somewhat overwhelmed with all the stuff on this forum,
I could immediately relate to the comment by Crossroads.
I've only been here a few days and its already becoming difficult to keep pace with all the players and songs.

I'm not suggesting you change anything, just making an observation.

An Old Man Make'n Music

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