Mario,
your modification/interpretation sounds much less midi - largely to the change in melody carrying voice.
The maraca is a little loud for my taste but overall i think you've taken this track quite a few steps forward.
The change is bass & bass level makes a huge difference.
The phrasing of the melody is still a little "mechanical" but it is what it is.
Good job.


Cheers
rayc
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