Nice voice.
The backing leans heavily to the left for a minute but balances soon enough.
Everything sees louder than everything else.
It may not be genre appropriate but if you have you kick, bass & vocal at the same level and then the other parts about 6dB lower and panned away you should then be able to carve some space for the vocal.
Cool song though.


Cheers
rayc
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