Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

A lovely delicate piece (almost a Nick Drake feel) well performed and arranged.
A very enticing lyric, and overall very well done.

Peter


Peter,
Nick Drake wrote a lot into very simple lyrics- if this reminds of his style I`m happy.
Thanks for commenting.



Originally Posted By: Tangmo
A lyric to melt into delivered with soft grace. The band is all it needs to be, and the progression (and melody wrung from it) moves me as well. Excellent package.


Thank you, Mr T!



Originally Posted By: jannesan
I enjoyed the simple poetic lyric, mysterious imagery expressed in few words. Not a haiku but I had to count the syllables smile The beautiful chording works very well with the picking guitar and that nice melodic cello. Great ending like falling into a colorful dream.

Janne



Janne,
I let the VersePerfect software count my syllables.Thank you for your very kind comments!

Robert