The force of powerful lyrics usually don't hit me until after I've heard the song. Song lyrics can be poetic but they aren't poetry. It is the music that brings them to fruition, it seems to me. Then, after a song really has moved me, am I able to read the lyrics as something separate.

Obviously the Pulitzer Prize people think different since they gave Bob Dylan a prize for his lyrics. smile

In any event, your lyrics read good. Writing for me is like opening a can of worms. I am never 100% happy with my lyrics, no matter how much I work on them.

Last edited by jptjptjpt; 07/02/20 05:33 PM.

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