Originally Posted By: Frankp
Yes that is beyond suggestive. Definitely not sex drugs and rock and roll, more of a sultry sexy vibe, and very bold. I vote Soul, like Al Green. Love it.

I hope I'm not out of line with this, what you have is great but as I was listening this popped into my head... I could see the chorus being this, with the line "When my woman makes love to me" being repeated with harmony. That would hammer in the hook, and make it more of a sing-along chorus.

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
When my woman makes love to me
With an unfulfilled desire
When my woman makes love to me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me


Hi Frank ...

You're never out of line when making constructive comments, offering suggestions or comments in general. With very few exceptions, most of us here appreciate all that.

Your suggestions are good. If I ever get a chance to redo this one, I'll definitely use them. Wishing you the very best. Please be safe ...

Alan

PS: Glad you joined us here on the Showcase Forum. I've enjoyed your music.


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