Hey Now!
That's damn good for a first song.
I'd be embraced to put my first son up here for critique.

I like the construction & guitar sounds great.
Vocals are very good and the added backing vocals are placed nicely.
However, The vocals sound a bit boxy.
I think you need some EQ on that to make it pop a little.

Although the guitar is driving the beat nicely, I have to agree it could use a little bottom end with some added drums & maybe bass.

All in all, I think you could have a winner here with just a bit of tweaking.

moto