Originally Posted By: Gary Weder
Vaer hilset Janne
I very much enjoyed listening to your song.
I would agree with your self assessment of overthinking the verse. IMO it needs less words and less melody which would provide the Ying and Yang to make that wonderful chorus really stand out. To quote Enzo Ferrari "you pay for the engine, the rest you get for free". Of course Enzo was talking cars but even such music giants as John Lennon followed this philosophy. Methinks that I am not suggesting anything that you don't know already.
Med venlig hilsen.
Gary.


Thanks Gary very much for your listen and the nice comment smile You are right about Ying/Yang, good advice, but it is not easy to follow - I would need an editor who would decide which parts to leave out when I cannot choose between several favorite lines wink

Janne

BTW thanks for the nice Finnish words and wonderful words about my country in your reply to my comment on your fine song Marty the Frog smile This time, you used language I'm not sure whether it is Norwegian or something else, but not my language smile


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