Hi Firesong.
Wonderful melody and treatment. I like the Marty Robbins sound in your voice.

Not too keen on the idea of a moth drawn to a flame unless of course the subject is about to die.
I also wondered if it needs the heaviness of the drums either. Maybe just a tambourine or kick. Something less busy.

Lovely song anyway.

Vic

Last edited by vicarn; 03/06/21 08:11 AM.