Hi jannesan,

really liked your well thought out and well written lyrics. The range of chords you have chosen is not easy for the vocal, but you have adapted perfectly to it. Your guitar solo is perfect. Your voice is well posed especially with the semitones and the deep value of the words sung. Well done.

kindly regards
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash


Kindly regards
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash