Hi Barry.
This song is very good . The lyrics , voice , mix and arrangement are all very professional sounding ,.. perhaps a little too professional for my prosaic ears but that does not detract from the quality of your song.
As for the YouTube clip ; I understand the desire to match pictures to the lyrics (which you have done very well) but personally , I felt the vigorous rush of images distracted from the music.
This is not a criticism Barry of your fine song , rather just a personal preference to be taken with a huge grain of salt.
cheers
Gary.