Originally Posted By: gruverider
There seems to me a peaceful elation in the melody. Very well done.

On my speakers the bass guitar was sort of buried. And the Left and right channels felt bright in a way that distracted my attention away from your beautiful melody. But it might simply be my speakers.

Much enjoyed!


Thanks Marvin. Will go back a revisit the mix. Glad you liked it

Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Scott,

I think Elena will get married by the time you have lyrics on this beatiful melody with the impressing leadguitar!
But I believe (as a singer) you need vocals in it. If only for Elena!

At the beginning of may I will become a grandpa too, for the first time! A girl. So, I have to make a song on that event too, but I will tell her later I had to see her grow up, so I could make a very nice song. and that this took me some years. There I will point at you; hear the result, it was worth waiting, I then say to her.

But make lyrics and let Robert sing.
And don't wait till my grandchild gets married...

Hans



Lol I think I have planted a seed of interest for Robert. Elena loves the song and hopefully if all works out we will have lyrics and a vocal in the future. And yes I think Robert would be perfect for the vocal.

Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Scott,
A lovely melody you`re playing,like a musical balloon floating happy hopes for the young lass(almost the same age as my youngest).
Its just fine as is, though you never know about that lyric guy!

Robert


Thanks Robert as you can see there are a few people lobbying for a vocal and lyric :-). Glad you liked it.

Scott Collingwood
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