That's creative. Exceedingly so.

Your accent shows and works well to augment the tune.

Ray needs to avoid the magic mushrooms when writing.... Or maybe not. Those lyrics... Wow.

Totally enjoyed it.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.