Thanks to everyone who commented on this tune. I was a little disappointed with the vocal, but as Nigel pointed out, he sang in tune and that is worthy in itself. I still may keep this one in my back pocket for the day a good rnb singer crosses my path. There are some good rnb singers on fiverr but they want way more money than I am willing to pony up.

By the comments, I need to do a better job mixing. I think the only answer to that is to have somebody else do the mix. I may have this one mixed, because in truth, I think this is one of the best songs I've ever done and I'm thrilled with the melody. It just goes to show, perhaps, how important a good mix is, and that a bad mix can prevent listeners from hearing the song.

Also - I kinda phoned in the lyrics, I think, in order to get the song out. I'm glad nobody seemed to feel that way.

Thanks again to all.

Windows 10, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 6i6, Komplete keyboard, Sony Acid Music Studio 11, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak