Hi Tunemonger,

It's been a while since I first listened to your song.

It appears you may have done a remix - it sound much, much better.

In particular the vocals sit much better in the mix. They could be improved further with a little editing in your DAW - a few notes pop out and some of the phrases are a bit quiet. But this is not critical.

I don't think you need to change vocalist - the current vocals suit the song.

Panning the piano and harp left and right - yes good idea but again not critical.

Well done!

Best Regards
Nigel

Last edited by NigelSpiers; 05/21/21 04:50 AM.

Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
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