Strong chorus and bridge, and a real stirring rocker. Great idea for a song, too. The relativity of distance. Fifteen feet can surely seem like a billion miles. Well sung, and I love the harmony. A catchy hook for sure. It's one of those hooks that could come up in regular conversation. "Hand me those pliers." Singing: "But they're 15 feet, they're just 15 feet away." Stop singing: "Get 'em yourself." Man, we all know that feeling yo're singing about, Deej. Well done.


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