Hi Greg,

This is another excellent song - two in one day!

Vocals - very tasty.

Song - nice chords and good swirly feel at the start with synths, tinkly piano and spartan drums.

Mix - excellent.

I think this song could be taken to another level by dropping the synths and piano after the first verses and chorus and inserting a stronger beat & rhythm section in the middle. Drop it all out after the short lead break, highlight the vocals and maybe just drums and then bring the swirly synths and piano back at the end. Please don't take this as criticism - the song is fine as it stands. But I can see even more potential here.

look forward to hearing more of your songs.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com