Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hi Marty,

THAT WAS HUGE FUN !!!!!

A clever write wrapped in a very 'grippy' tune. Top-notch arrangement; liked your voacls a lot.

'More, more - I'm still not satishied!' (Tom Lehrer, 1965)

Stay safe,

Stefan


Thanks, Stefan. I've mentioned before how inspirational you are to me. Keep up the good word.

Originally Posted By: musician17
SUPERB. One of the most original songs I have ever heard on here. Increasingly dark humour in there :-) - absolutely brilliant!!!


Thanks, James. Not to worry about the increasing darkness. He did end up with a small window in his cell.

Originally Posted By: rayc
"But she grew into a pretty woman. Like Nature said she had it comin'.
'Though you know I'm not a fool, you coulda fooled me.'

That's near perfect - the melody and hook are ACE.
Nice band arrangement Marty and cool bass part too.
Yeah, I can't sing at the best of times but have NOT AT ANY TIME managed to do it with a bass in hand...something diametrically opposed in those for my little brain.
well done.


Thanks, Ray. Yeah, singing and playing bass don't match with me either. Both suffer. Seems I need my fingers to sing and my vocal cords to play bass. Thanks for mentioning the bass part. Sometimes playing just root-fourth patterns can be most challenging for me. Then to make it evolve with the song is another challenge.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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