Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Hi, Floyd. Man, I should really have my "Comment For Floyd" in my clipboard, so I can paste it here. You are definitely my favorite lyricist, and that's not limited to this forum. The way you think of the story and how you have just the perfect twist of phrase is truly a gift that you have honed to perfection --most likely without even trying.


What a very nice thing to say, Marty... Much appreciated!!!

Quote:

"her favorite jeans
are draped on the chair
her magazines
are still scattered everywhere"
What a great opening. Seems like the perfect first paragraph of a great book that one won't be able to put down.


...And a great way to identify JUST the way a song ought to open! Here's hoping we can all do THAT everytime we write!!...

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