It READS like a hot rod/car/surf song.
Plays like a reminiscence with regrets.
It does sound as is you're on the edge of an uncomfortable key but you carry it off with slightly melancholy whisper singing.
Nice.

Last edited by rayc; 08/14/21 05:47 PM.

Cheers
rayc
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