Hi TuneMonger,

A bit unexpected that you made this ballad. Like Bluage I expected to hear 'some heavy stuff', but then there was this very sensitive, lovely song. With very nice lyrics. I still hear your voice in my head, very sensitive and just beautiful.
There is one thing though. I had the feeling the key you sing in is a bit high on some parts. And then I saw Ray wrote something similar.
On the other hand, singing in this key, however, gives the song a nice fragile character.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130