I don't think vocal reverb or echo is an issue, part of the song is understandable some is not.

I just think you need to do some more vocal takes, perhaps a verse at a time, or even a phrase at a time. You could loop multiple takes and comp it (compile by using the best part of each take).

An example of where the words were not legible.

Gulped coffee by the pot
Now my head hurts, I don't feel so hot
Boo-hoo.

I couldn't get any of that. Just a performance issue mostly. Taking some words out might help also. "Gulped","Now" and "I" could go and with fewer words you should be able to enunciate better. "Boo-hoo" in your low register may be problematic, you're singing that as one word, probably need to separate it as two words for it to be understandable.

This one is also hard to understand.

Nothing I can't get past
Just want a punchy and fast
Song
To roll me along


Last edited by Frankp; 08/24/21 03:58 PM.
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