Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Janice, Bud and Peter,

This song aches with exquisite moodiness. Wow! The ambience—created by the arrangement, Janice's superb singing, Peter's skillful playing, the heartfelt lyrics and the well-considered production—frames emotional turmoil intensely and to perfection. I don't know how to even begin writing a song like this. Authenticity abounds in every aspect, every nuance.

"Without you I struggle to find my next step
"Without you the days seem to grow longer
"I do not want to leave doubt’s shadow
"It’s a safe harbor where my hope can linger"

The Longer/Linger relationship really caught my attention. It's perfectly placed to amplify the intensity of the turmoil of the lead character.

First class work by everyone and in every way!

All the best,
Noel


Noel, thank you for all of those comments and I (Bud), in particular, thank you for what you noted about the lyric. Writing does not come easy to me and hearing those remarks from a very skilled lyricist is most inspiring!

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