Hi David,
I have to say you've picked an interesting and yet obscure person to write about. In my view, this is a good thing because some folks who have never heard of him may look up who he is. A great opportunity to witness. There's a good sound from the band you picked as well as your vocals. The song has a nice build to it. Poor Jubal, we all came from dirt, we've all fallen short and sinned. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed the listen.