Nice song & production.
The vocals sound a little separate from the backing - probably because of the Audacity reverb. Using a common reverb will, often & along with some gentle compression, "glue" parts of a mix into a whole.
The bass does kick things along well with the drums but it weirds me out a little being over on the side.
On the narrative side I don't really think wild horses would do a lot of running in a chaparral but the words are evocative.
Good job.

Last edited by rayc; 09/08/21 05:36 PM.

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