Originally Posted By: justanoldmuso
nice song. cool lyrics and arrangement.
standing like a statue of salvation << BRILLIANT and very poetic.
oooh ..nice lead gtr. nice sound picture.
might i suggest doubling the vocs on the chorus ?
eg take it or leave me...
best/happiness
om


Oh, man, that's a great idea, om. I was trying to fit in some harmony but it wasn't working. Why didn't I think of double tracking. Thanks. man.

Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
That is one great chorus! Good song all around, but that chorus is the frosting.

Excellent vocal. Engaging melody.



Thanks, Ezekiel, Very kind of you.

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Marty

Nice laid back easy listen. Nice steel drum and engaging vocals, with a good chorus hook.

Excellent work on video as well.

Peter


Thanks, Peter. The steel drums took a bit to make them sound more subtle, but I like the results. It's great having so many options in one program.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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