Hi Frank, it does!

I enjoyed your song. Like Dave said, an hypnotic riff. From the kind I like very much!
And your vocals are outstanding. At first I had some (little) doubts on the first chorus, but as the song continues it was great. A bit a pitty it ended so sudden, and too soon. This could have going on for some more time. So I listened it again.
Everything is ok. Sounded 'radio ready' as I learned you have to mention it, if it is classy!

O, and I'm still listening now, again...
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130