David,

Love that opening. Grabs the ear nicely.

A clever write.
"Every night
I chase the same siren call
Looking forever for that damned ball"
That's strong.

BAND is nice. Good mix.

For my money, the shining star is the melody. Excellent.

The duet aspect is a nice touch, too...

The sound of this is stuck in my head long after listening...

fj