Originally Posted By: rayc
Torrey,
I'm glad you found the time to work on this.
Lovely melody & arrangement with cool changes.
The 1st four lines suggest you're not quite finished with this one...the same section in V2 is better realized.
Love your work...love your voice even more.


Thanks for the listen and comments Ray! It's funny how lyrics are evaluated differently by the listener. I felt better about the first verse than I did the second. I certainly put more thought and effort into those lines than I did the second verse. I was trying to set the stage for the chorus with those lines. Take care, T