Originally Posted By: vicarn
Poignant. A simple but distinct message with sympathetic arrangement.
Less is more.

Vic



Thanks Vic,
I'm starting to think simple is my thing.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
Captain, you set the bar extremely high with this one and I'm glad that I didn't miss it! Although I'm sure that everything I would say already has been said.

Super vocal! Outstanding lyrics and mix.

Your best to date IMHO.


Thanks Mario,
I appreciate your comments.


Originally Posted By: Gary Weder
More Moto Magic from the good Captain.

"This one reflects my observations of our current human condition.
People embracing wild conspiracies, authoritative leaders and fostering hate instead of love."

Small nit. I just need to know some specific examples for your dismay to fully engage with the intended message.... Or perhaps I shouldn't think so much and just enjoy your song.
Excellent emotive vocal delivery and backing band. Well Done.
regards
Gary.


Hey Gary,
Thanks for listening and providing input.
I think I unstained your "nit".
As an example of my motivation, we had a congress woman blame laser beams from space as the cause of California wild fires......that to me, is a complete disconnect from reality and the truth.
I suppose I could have been more direct in my lyrics to inform the listener but, I choose to keep it less specific.
I'd have to agree with your observation though.
It's the writer's responsibility to inform and engage the listener.

An Old Man Make'n Music

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