Hello Folks,
I was unable to edit the OP on the original thread for this song so had to start a new one.
I spent some time listening to & thinking about my last couple of songs.
The vocals need work and I was tempted, as suggested by Floyd, to opt for synthesis BUT figured I'd better have a solid crack at doing it myself before that.
Yesterday I was alone in the house so was able to "sing" louder and for longer.
I sang slightly across the mic to reduce the harshness, plosives and sibilance in my recorded voice.
I think I achieved a less annoying recording in those terms.
This version of the song has double tracked vocals, no de-essing etc., a little tuning and some Melodyne created harmonies in the verses.
It needs more work but I seem to have managed the choruses a bit better if nothing more.
AS I LIE AWAKE - NO PITCH CHEAT TRACKING.
Thoughts, suggestions etc. always welcome and usually attempted.
UPDATE
Errant notes corrected etc.
This is the update on the other mumble song. It still needs LOTS of work on the choruses, I can't post it at the top of its own thread for the seam reason as this one...
Other Mumble Track Updated.
& here's a third track from the "free to shout" session...though it's earmarked by another singer...
Perfect Stranger (Killing A...)

Last edited by rayc; 02/20/22 09:16 PM.
Cheers
rayc
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