Hi David,

I had a holiday and no contact with the forum.
So I'm a bit late to judge your song. But I read a lot of the posts on it, all positive!
And that is exactly my feeling too. You made a very nice song, nice melody and the vocals are very, very, very close to real humans. It's getting dangerous now for the humans...
I only had some hesitations on 0:58 and 2:17. To my opinion the vocals could use a pitch correctio there.
But on the other had, the harmony starting at 1:50 was very good.

Can your vocals sing Dutch too? Then I have a song or two in where they could be used. Especially the vocals used in this song.

So, lots of compliments and you earned them!

Happy Eastern, or take care with eating to much eggs!
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130