Originally Posted By: Byron Dickens
Great tune, great vibe, great arrangement. Everything fits perfectly.

Thanks, Byron!!

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Hi, Marty.

My first thought was "That's can't be a Band in a Box lead guitar!"[/i]. David did a great job on this.

Love the vocals, and the backing is perfect. Sounds awesome through my speakers.

Thanks, David. My thought: that SHOULD be a BiaB lead guitar.

Originally Posted By: rayc
Marty - this song, amongst other things, demonstrates how adding more "human" elements bring the BIAB stuff lo life.
Terrific vocal, terrific narrative.
Bass is DEEEEEP and grooves.
Dave's playing - yes, a lead player who is there to hear and respond to the song make a lot of difference.
Solid mix and not nits at all.
The lyric does point out a significant difference between Murcan & Strine: your say different than & we say different to, (a short cutting of "when compared to").
Excellent.

Thanks, Ray. Your knowledge of various things always astounds me, man. I had to look up "Murcan & Strine", and guess what. Your comment here was 2nd on the list of answers. Dude, even Google knows the best sources for knowledge. You're absolutely right about bringing in the human element to make the song more alive.

Originally Posted By: AudioTrack
Clever lyrics, clever write. Great use of the guitar and the organ fills which slot in really nicely.

Great job.


Thanks, AT! Yeah, I really like how so often the Biab players seem to know when to bring it out. That makes it so easy to mix.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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