Originally Posted By: Gordon Scott
I played around for a while with the progression, which is a nice progression BTW

Yep, that's the reason I couldn't let it go crazy

Originally Posted By: Gordon Scott

In some respects, the progression is almost designed to unsettle things; it's actually working around the circle of fifths ... that what makes it interesting, but it leaves us unsure where to go next.

My temptation would be to precede the progression with a short intro that firmly established the starting key, so you know where to aim back, then I think it will resolve more confidently.

I think that's a good idea. The first 4 chords were actually the intro, but why not write an intro to the intro?
Thanks a lot for your time and detailed analysis, I really appreciate it smile


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