I thought 'NOT QUITE READY but circumstances dictate' was a pretty interesting song title until I read that it wasn't shocked

I think it sounds already pretty good and mature for a WIP.
I like the verses a lot, the choruses are a bit bumpy and could have a better flow.
Interesting (in a good way) drum pattern, the ride cymbals could have a little break here or there.


Making bits and bytes sound good...

Goldmania Bella - A One-Man Girlband with no fans
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