Originally Posted By: Brad Williams
Howdy Ray, I think you've got a good one going here. I'm unfamiliar with the band you've mentioned, so I don't know how the words fit in that respect, but I think it's a good write overall. It may be just a personal thing, but I like the simplicity of this mix as compared to some of your others. There were a couple of places where the vocal could use a little polish, but I liked the way you sang it. I thought the bass work was good too. I also thought that ending music could have been a little more abrupt, but again that's just a personal style thing. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished product - this is good.
Brad

Thanks Brad,
despite their influence not a lot of folk know the band, certainly not a chart act except in the UK.
The lyrics aren't related to the band in any way - just words to fit the spaces.
The vocal could use A LOT of polish but thanks for your kind words.

Last edited by rayc; 01/29/23 03:12 PM.
Cheers
rayc
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