Hahahaha, excellent!!! Brava, and welcome, Rachel, to the forum!!!

One thing I'm gonna say: your vocals are excellent, Rachel, so don't hold back, haha. It sounds to me like you're holding back just a tad, which is normal if this is your first song recording yourself in. DON'T hold back, I would personally suggest. Give it both barrels, lol - because the talent and the vocal skills ARE there.

Looking forward to hearing more from you two, David and Rachel. What a way to start.