Pretty good lyrics, and you made a nice song out of it.
The guitars are a bit too busy for my taste, I would have preferred more sustained notes. But it's also good the way it is now.

'I have a lot of yesterdays but my tomorrows wearing thin' is something I would never have thought of (as a non-native speaker).
Excellent


Making bits and bytes sound good...

Goldmania Bella - A One-Man Girlband with no fans
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