Originally Posted By: Planobilly
Good Hook

I may have set in one night at the Crabby Lady. Another waterfront dive...lol

Fun stuff

Billy
Like Stan’s The Crabby Lady is now 2nd generation. Thanks for stopping by,Tom
Originally Posted By: rayc
Fun narrative and a cracking good pace.
Really enjoyable stuff.
As a nit I'd suggest attending to the "old man esses" that jump out a bit.
I'm certain few may notice and fewer care but they jumped out at me so are worth mentioning.
Excellent song.
Thanks for listening. I do have old man whistle. Because I whistle while I work and I am definitely old!, Tom