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https://soundcloud.com/lee-brown-75/wake-up-call




Hello forum Members. My latest offering is based around a medical episode I had/have recently, and this is why I've been a little absent on the forum lately, my apologies. Nothing too serious, I'm sure I've been a little self indulgent with this one, and should count my blessings. For someone who is on the whole healthy, when something catches you off guard and off your feet, it makes you consider your mortality. I'm all good, and I realise it's all in my head in, just got to work through it. I'm not sure if I even like this song, I've been working on it for quite a while, and they do wear thin after a while. The vocals are a bit fragile, but I guess that lends to the subject matter. I'd be interested if listeners are hearing enough variation in my songs, I don't want to get stuck in the same vein all the while.

Thank you for listening and your feedback, kind regards.

Lyrics:
Laid down beneath an aging Jacaranda,
Sky above weighed down where I lay.
Hold on to daylight and not fade to grey.
Earth spinning faster, focus started to wander.
Unsteady, grasping for breathe, feeling uneasy,
An angry racing heart, pounding my chest within.
Time, body and mind diverge, aflood with adrenaline.
No longer twenty-three, time to back off, take it easy.

Wake up call, coming through loud and clear, howling in my ear.
Wake up call, the universe is telling me, you’re no longer twenty-three,
I got my wake up call.

Left alone with my high anxiety,
Muddling my senses with it’s false narrative.
Sleep don’t come easy, lord give me sedative.
Mind stuck in fight or flight just won’t let me be.
Lay my head on the pillow, not feeling too sleepy,
A loud troubled heart, thumping in my temple.
Time, body and mind converge, aflood with cortisol.
Tell myself I’m gonna be alright, dwelling on my vulnerability.

Wake up call, coming through loud and clear, howling in my ear.
Wake up call, the universe is telling me, you’re no longer twenty-three,
Wake up call, wake up call, wake up call. No longer twenty-three,
I’m sixty-three that’s my vulnerability .
I got my wake up call.

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Style is _CEDAR.STY (Cedar Woodblock Acoustic Praise)
RealTracks in style: 1255:Bass, Electric, PopShiningA-B Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1277:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopUpliftA-B Ev16 120
RealTracks in style: ~405:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 120
RealDrums in style:PraiseWorshipShine-01-SCHt,SRCy [Multi]

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Seagull Coastline Electro-acoustic - rhythm
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BVs - me too.

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Welcome back! Sorry for your recent medical episode, glad it wasn't too serious. Many of us have had that wake up call telling us we weren't 23 (or 53) any more. Sounds like you've put it in the right perspective, which is of course important.

Cool song! That Seagull sounds great early on, and sets up the rest of the tune nicely. Super harmonic progression and strong arrangement to keep momentum throughout this long-ish song form. Think your vocals are perfect for the tune. "Fragile" works perfectly.

Great example of making lemonade when all you have are lemons. Nice one!


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Hi Lee!
I wondered when you were going to post next - and this is a good re-entry. We’ll have to give it a strum next time we meet. That initial chord change I - III (e.g. C - Emajor) is the gift that keeps on giving and never grows tired - well deployed by you. I like that piano break in the middle - some very tasty notes in there. Listened three times already.

One question - is that you (with FX) or the missus in the intro?

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Lee,

I really like this one. Great song and your vocal has a very cool Neil Young feel.

Very nicely done.

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Lee, Great intro.
"No longer twenty-three, time to back off, take it easy" what great line that I can relate. Great vocals, guitar, and mix.
As I have had a wake up call I can relate to the entire song.
I loved everything about this song.


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Good autobiographical lyrics and story, beautifully and openly told.
Real life (unfortunately too often) writes the best stories.
Good to hear that your life is (more or less, I guess) back to normal, whatever normal is...

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Thank you for the listen Ron.

I’d like to take the credit for playing the Seagull early on, but in fact it’s the Realtrack for the intro and first verse. The Seagull comes in when the bass does and it’s overpowered by the bass as I tried to imply a sense of foreboding in the second verse. Then the chorus comes in and the Seagull is a bit more prominent. I think you’re right that the fragile vocals work well with the subject. I recorded them whilst I was still in that worried headspace and it adds to the feel.

Thank you, kind regards.

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Hello Mr Dee,

Thank you for your listens and review. I’ve caught you out buddy, that initial chord change is C to Cmaj7. I just played C to E major, whilst that works, C to Cmaj7 has that little bit of extra melancholy to it. As per the message to DC Ron, I can’t claim credit for the piano either, that’s BIAB too. I did think about putting a solo in the break, but I gave it to the Piano because as you say, there were a few tasty notes in there.Yep, we’ll definitely give it a crack at the next meet. Alas, I again can’t take credit for the opening or give credit to the missus, it’s a sound bite off the net. It would be ironic though if it were her, as if anything it would be me waking her to stop her snoring!!

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Hi Bob,

Thank you man, for your kind review. Any comparison to Mr.Young is high praise indeed, in my book.

Kind regards.

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Thank you Mario,

Yes, the intro and first verse came up well, and as I mentioned in a prior post, up until that point it’s all BIAB. I said in other reviews that singing, playing, writing and recording is great therapy, and I felt I needed to get this song “out of my system” as part of my recovery and mental healing.

Im glad you could relate to it, and that enjoyed the song. Hope all is good for you after your wake up call. Much love buddy.

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Thank you BD,

Thank for the listen and kind words. I can’t agree more about real life writing the best stories, good or bad. Yeah, getting back to normal mentally can take a while after the physical event, but really mine was minor compared to what other people go through. But it does hammer home, to not take things for granted and live in the moment.

Thank you, kind regards

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Many on this forum are no longer 23, and health problems often appear with age. So you need to take care of yourself by maintaining a healthy lifestyle: a balanced diet and regular physical activity. It sounds silly, but many people believe that age has no effect on them, but unfortunately, that's a denial of reality. When you accept this and correct certain harmful lifestyle habits, you often feel much better as you get older.

And congratulations on your song.
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Jacarandas can be spectacular can't they? A lovely canopy to sit under.
Cool song and mix. Some of the intro percussion could be softened with some reverb but that's just me.
At my age, 68, every thing, from putting things in the dish washer to mowing, is a wake up call.
Once the songs settles in your vocal is perfect in it's slightly fragile emotional state.


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Greetings Laurent,

Yes, Im guilty of feeling immortal. But I know that I need to keep mentally and physically active and monitor lifestyle practices.

Thank you for you advice and kind words, kind regards

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Hi Ray,

Yes agreed, Jacarandas are beautiful in flower. The street we moved into 12 or so years ago are lined with them. Come November/December here in Australia, they come into flower and drop their flowers. It prompted my daughter, having come from England five years prior, to comment upon seeing all flowers on the road, “look, purple snow!”

Thank you for the listen and review. Yep, we have to consider our next action at our age, we don’t know what’s going to hurt or drop off!

Cheers Ray, kind regards

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Hi,

I think Andrew was referring to the E that followed the Cmaj7 in the verse:

C Cmaj7 E E7

That caught my ear as well - a very 60's sound, and it works really well here.

Nice song! smile


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Aah, and so it is David, that was my bad.Sorry Mr.Dee.

Thank you for listening David, I appreciate your kind comments, kind regards.

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Originally Posted by Knee Wobbler
Aah, and so it is David, that was my bad.Sorry Mr.Dee.

Thank you for listening David, I appreciate your kind comments, kind regards.
I was beginning to doubt myself! crazy

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Enjoyed this song. It's universal and I suspect many of us in these forums can relate. I certainly can.

If the vocals are fragile - I don't find that they are - then so be it, because they fit.

This is serious and tough subject matter to write about. You handled it well.


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Very cool, Lee. The fragility you mention in the vocal effectively delivers the lyrics that can draw out gobs of empathy from even the youngest listener. It sounds like something John Lennon would've written and played in his white piano room if he lived long enough. I like Beth's comment on Harrison too. Yeah, when the song progresses with the harmony I hear the Wilbury's too.


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