Robb,

Here's my opinions for what it's worth:

1. The electric guitar has no high end - that's why it sounds 'stuck in the mud.

2. The snare has a distortion sound to it that makes too much out front in the overall song's spectrum content.

3. On the vocals, I think you could probably raise the HPF cutoff another 50 to 100 Hz and the muddiness that is present at times (it doesn't sound muddy to me the whole way through like the electric guitar does) will start to fade. The vocal is also very dry. A tad reverb wouldn't hurt it at all, AFTER you cut some more low end out of the vox.

I'd love to have an opportunity to re-mix this for you - if you can save off the individual tracks as high bit rate .mp3 files (to keep the overall project size small), and identify what is squirrelly with that snare first, I'll take a crack at re-mixing the song for you.

-Scott

Last edited by rockstar_not; 05/08/13 09:46 PM.