Hi Jamie,

Welcome to the forum.

I love the poignancy and the emotional intensity that you captured in both your lyrics and your presentation. I found the whole journey beautiful.

The lines...

"Life takes you down roads you thought you'd never see
"Paths that twist and turn into reality
"Leading through green fields into the blackest sea"

...resonated very strongly with me.

A terrific first effort!

All the best with song #2!
Noel


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