Hey Neighbor. (Ok so you're in Texas and I'm in Louisiana) Great job on this. Good balance and structure. I agree with Noel about the ending but it's not horribly important that you change it. But it would make the ending more catchy. I also agree about the harmony. Harmony is a great way to break up repetitiveness.

As to bringing up your vox, I don't think so. It's right in my face as it is. Might add a splash more of reverb to better match the instruments. Not too much tho'. I'd rather hear it like it is rather than drown it. Using reverb and echo is a pretty fine art. If done right it makes for ambiance perfection. Another trick that would really work is to lower your rhythm guitar during your vocal parts then have it bounce back up where you're not singing. If you're patient you can simply lower the entire guitar volume then, using the gain change editor, increase the guitar volume when you take a breath or when you have a vocal rest. It's a bit like compressing, but done manually. You have much greater control over everything when you do that. Instruments, such as, guitars, pianos, etc., tend to stay fairly even on volume so they have to be controled. Drums and bass you don't really want to fool with, unless, the drums are out there hot. Then you have to play with volume controlling on that too. Otherwise you would usually leave those two instruments alone. Just a thought. Hope it's helpful.

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