Hi, HTL !
This was simply wonderful
and a lot different than
jingles !!!(chuckle)
So true! One funny thing about that is I tend to write my verses, choruses, and bridges in my songs 30 seconds each. It's hard to break those habits! I end up just changing the tempo

You have a nice voice
very suitable for this genré
and probably for many others
too ! The backing vocals were spot on !
Thanks for the voice compliment...I wish I could say that's me. That's one of the many studio singers I use for work. They ALWAYS make me sound MUCH better than I am!
I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. I love hearing people's perspective on everything. I think everyone of us knows the feeling of being so close to something that it's hard to know how it would resonate with anyone else. Thanks again!