I've been reminding myself to use more alliteration in my own lyrics, and then I hear it done excellently here.

Your verses are always great, but the way the chorus wraps everything up in bow and tugs at the heart knocks me out. As PeterF says, a "songwriting class".

And a great arrangement to boot! Nice solo and rhythm guitar parts.

As usual, good music done right. smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?