Tangmo,
Very good stuff here! Lyrics are strong, and boy you have a way with them!
Arrangement is sweet. Very nice flute and organ solos!
It might be a good idea to bring vocals to the front somewhat. I had to read lyrics to fully grasp it. And I feel that guitar is way to the right. But those two things are a matter of taste of course. Excellent work!

Thank you for sharing!

Misha.