Hi Lawrence,

Once again, you've created a truly outstanding listen. I love the elegance of the accompaniment that you've assembled. It compliments your vocal so incredibly well. Your performance is first class listening from start to finish.

These lyrics are awesome! The chorus really stood out to me.

Originally Posted By: Lawrence Olivier
I had no idea time was about to rob me
rob me of the one thing
the one thing that had kept me hanging on

I finally read those letters you had sent me
your true love had convinced me
When I left you, Tammy I was wrong

I love how you've used 'end of line' / 'beginning of line' repetition with "rob me" and "one thing". It's very, very effective. I also really like the sound relationship between "sent me" and "convinced me".

In all honesty, this is absolutely wonderful listening.

All the best,
Noel


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