Hey Manning!

I think the lyrics and delivery are too hopeful for the subject matter. But I have heard many of your songs, and you
are a generally cheerful, upbeat guy.

If it accomplishes what YOU want, then it is fine.

Let's be clear here...I could never have written "Happy Days are Here Again". We all interject our perspective in our lyrics.

I tried writing a love song, once. Once. Then I wrote something about Hurricane Katrina. More in my element. Pain and suffering!!!!

Do what you enjoy doing, and keep writing!

Moo

If it has four legs and moos...it MIGHT be Mr Moohead.