Lovely composition!
I have two thoughts for possible improvements:

-The beginning is just a tad to abrupt, add a little space there and do a gentle fade in.
Same for the end, the choir ends before the rest of the orchestra, extend them slightly and smooth out the ending fade.
-The piano seems to be overpowering everything else in the mix, I'd like to hear the choir pop through a bit more.

Otherwise, a very moody piece, I can imagine this as a movie score for something like "Game of Thrones".

moto

Last edited by CaptainMoto; 10/25/20 10:43 AM.